1. Understanding the Prescribed Title (PT)
- Did you fully understand the PT?
- Have you broken down key terms in the PT?
- Have you identified hidden assumptions in the PT?
- Have you formulated Knowledge Questions (KQs) related to the PT?
- Does your essay respond directly to the PT?
- Every argument must connect to the PT.
- Avoid reinterpreting the question—stick to what it actually asks.
- Have you chosen the best Areas of Knowledge (AOKs) for analysis?
- Do your AOKs provide contrasting perspectives?
- Are your AOKs relevant to the PT?
- Do your AOKs allow for strong real-world examples?
2. Introduction (Approximately 150-200 words)
- Did you engage the reader?
- Does your introduction start with a thought-provoking idea, real-world example, or question?
- Did you define key terms from the PT?
- Have you provided contextual definitions instead of generic dictionary definitions?
- Is your thesis clear?
- Have you clearly stated your stance or line of argument?
- Does your thesis address the PT directly?
- Did you outline your structure?
- Have you briefly introduced your AOKs and how they will support your argument?
3. Body Paragraphs (Approximately 1200 words total)
Each AOK should be covered in two paragraphs:
- Paragraph 1: Claim (How this AOK supports a specific perspective on the PT)
- Paragraph 2: Counterclaim (A contrasting perspective within the same AOK)
AOK 1 Analysis
- Claim Paragraph (Approximately 300 words)
- Have you made a clear claim related to the PT?
- Have you used a specific real-world example?
- Have you explained why this example is relevant?
- Have you included TOK concepts such as ways of knowing, justification, and certainty?
- Counterclaim Paragraph (Approximately 300 words)
- Have you provided a contrasting viewpoint to challenge your claim?
- Have you supported the counterclaim with a real-world example?
- Have you explained the implications of this challenge?
AOK 2 Analysis
- Claim Paragraph (Approximately 300 words)
- Does this AOK provide a different perspective on the PT?
- Have you included real-world evidence?
- Have you clearly linked it to TOK themes such as the reliability of knowledge, bias, and ethics?
- Counterclaim Paragraph (Approximately 300 words)
- Have you critically examined a weakness or alternative perspective?
- Have you presented a balanced argument rather than just one-sided reasoning?
4. Conclusion (Approximately 250 words)
- Have you summarized your main insights?
- Does your conclusion clearly restate your findings without repeating word-for-word?
- Did you answer the PT?
- Have you given a final verdict on whether the claim or counterclaim is stronger?
- Have you considered limitations?
- Have you acknowledged any weaknesses in your argument?
- Have you suggested how other perspectives might challenge your conclusion?
- Did you leave the reader with a thought-provoking idea?
- Have you included a final reflection or open-ended question?
5. Use of TOK Concepts and Vocabulary
- Are you using TOK terminology effectively?
- Have you naturally included key TOK terms such as ways of knowing, knowledge questions, justification, bias, and certainty?
- Did you avoid overusing jargon?
- Have you ensured that every TOK term is clearly explained rather than just name-dropped?
- Have you addressed different perspectives?
- Have you considered alternative viewpoints within each AOK?
- Did you analyze rather than just describe?
- Have you explained how knowledge is constructed rather than just stating facts?
6. Quality of Real-World Examples
- Are your examples specific and relevant?
- Have you used real-world examples from credible sources such as history, science, personal experiences, and current events?
- Have you avoided hypothetical or vague examples?
- Have you analyzed each example?
- Have you explained why your example supports your argument?
- Have you considered any counterexamples or limitations?
- Are your examples diverse?
- Have you used examples from different disciplines, cultures, or perspectives?
7. Writing Style and Organization
- Is your essay well-structured?
- Does your argument flow logically from introduction to claims, counterclaims, and conclusion?
- Are your paragraphs clearly structured with topic sentences and transitions?
- Is your writing clear and concise?
- Have you eliminated wordiness and repetition?
- Are your sentences grammatically correct?
- Have you avoided informal language?
- Have you used proper citations (if required)?
- Have you credited all sources using a consistent citation style such as MLA or APA?
8. Final Editing Checklist
- Have you checked for grammar and spelling mistakes?
- Have you met the word count (1200-1600 words)?
- Have you asked your TOK teacher to review your essay?
- Have you ensured every paragraph is directly relevant to the PT?