Script Doctor - Guided

SCRIPT DOCTOR — GUIDED (StoryFrame)

"Stop Rewriting. Start Diagnosing."

Get a studio-level autopsy of your script’s failure points. This Guided Engagement identifies exactly why your scene is stalling and provides clear paths to fix it, without losing your voice. (for deeper diagnostics, select Collaborative mode)

A deep, multi-pass diagnostic engagement for one specific script problem.

This is not rewriting. It’s precision diagnosis: why the scene/turn fails, where pressure breaks, what readers object to, and what to test next.

You’ll receive

• A structured diagnostic report with:
• Failure mechanism (what’s failing and why)
• Stakes & escalation audit
• Character pressure + decision logic
• Scene function and momentum problems
• Reader objections (contest/manager/producer mindset)
• Ranked rewrite priorities (what to fix first, what to protect)
• Targeted tests (measurable revision experiments)

Best for

• A scene that “should work” but doesn’t
• A midpoint decision that feels arbitrary
• Flat second act / weak escalation
• Unclear stakes, muddy desire, reader fatigue
• Confusion about why tension drops

How it works

1. Purchase this Guided engagement.
2. You’ll receive a license key on the Payhip receipt/download page.
3. Email your License Key with your script attached to the email address provided in the PDF.

Note: This service is diagnostic and does not write new pages or rewrite your voice.