COWGIRLS VERSUS
CUSTOM
«Hi, Ugine!
thanks really really much for the other spectacular job!
The long first part that precedes the shootout scene is made exactly for me and therefore I appreciate a lot that you shooted it in this way.
Especially I like that you put a stress on the part in which the girls take their cowgirl clothes and the perfect mid part in which they have some innocent fun with their boyfriends (I like these extra added moments with legs on the table or Sally sitting on her boyfriend's lap).
Besides this great atmosphere and acting that at the vary beginning a little bit resembles the old classic movie Gone With the Wind I like some special details:
- the girls' short hair style that reveals fully their tender necks. It is damned hot,
- during the clothes putting on I love the moment in which Sally puts her white blouse into the trousers and when Trex puts her hat on with a very self-confident and serious (but still naive) expression. Also taking the belts and the clothes as whole are super sexy because it nicely shows the slim girls's bodies. It is again good for me that the clothes is as well very natural and not affected. This made another very nice element,
- finally the moment when Sally orders her boyfriend to go to help to fight his friend and this is the last thing she says to him is quite sensitive.
As a complete result this is a really my style film in which we can for a long time enjoy the girls' carelessness and their fun just before the fatal action and unexpected dark end».
Customer’s Review
Western style story about cowgirls and their boyfriends revenge to bandits for attacks of their families and farms… Brave girls die in the firefight and their boyfriends ave a chance to revenge…
DETAILED PLOT
This story needs one location and 4 actors - two girls/two guys.
The clip is (but very little bit) inspired by the Italian (spaghetti western) movie from 1966 called "Franco e Cicio - I Due Figli di Ringo" - according to this title you can find it also on youtube, the part by which my script is inspired starts at 1.21.45.
But as I said: it is the old crazy Italian comedy (and not well-known) and of course there are no female death scenes or fetish props.
My story starts with the scene in some room/bar/pub/farm house etc. where two beautiful young girls talk.
They wear some female old dress, not sexy, not attractive, just ordinary and loose female robes.
They look like common boring housewives.
But on the bed (or chair, floor) there are guns and jeans put and prepared, there are also boots on the floor.
Both girls stand and slowly unfasten the top parts of their non-attractive old robes. Their neat chests and pieces of underwear/lingerie can be seen.
During this slow undressing they talk:
"Well.. our day of revenge has finally came. We have to kill all these damned bandits. Actually.... I think my father died because of them. They have attacked our farm so many times that his weak heart could stand it anymore" says one girl.
"Yes. And they don't know that today we are prepared for them.... I would love to get their ugly boss especially. That bastard raped my sister. And..... I think ... it will not be difficult to get these rednecks ... they are all old and drunk that they hardly can hold their guns. And we are young and fast..... And finally our honeys can help us" answers another girl with eager smile.
While they talk partly in their underwear somebody knocks on the door. These are their boyfriends.
But we are in the strict 19th century and the girls are very moral and religious. Their boyfriends should not see them nude because they have known each other very shortly.
So when one of the girls hears knocking she just smiles and says: "Oh, dear, not just yet" and with a simulated annoyed expression she goes, opens the door, puts her hand on the guy's chest and pushes him back out of the door with the flirting smile. Then she shuts the door.
Now there is an edit.
Next part of the story is in the same room with the same girls.
But now they are not in the old fashioned dresses anymore.
Now they are completely in the cowgirl style. The girls have the hats, the boots and very tight trousers: one girl has ordinary but sexy skinny jeans, another girl has leather trousers. On top they have very tight checkered or light blouses put into the trousers. There are belts and gun holsters at their waists.
One girl ties nice scarf around her throat. Then they both take their guns and put them into the holsters. They also look at their dress style and adjust sleeves and belts.
When they are ready they put their hands on their hips and again talk together.
"So we are ready. They have been bothering us for so long. Now we will get rid of them...."
"Yeah.... they will lose today ... And... I think now we can call our boys" the other girl answers.
"Guys....! You can go in" she calls happily.
Two men enter the room. They say hello to the girls and each man hugs his girlfriend warmly and they kiss very shortly.
Both couples look very happy and carelessly.
But then one girl stops laughing and huging her boyfriend and says to him: "Do you hear it? They are coming. Let's prepare!".
All of them takes firing position close to the windows. Each girl stands or kneels towards the window with her
gun ready. And the girls are still very confident and careless. They smile when they look out of the window with prepared guns.
Then there is a shootout with the bandits. There are detailed shots on the firing girls, on their kneeling or standing shooting positions. Even during the shootout and when they fire the girls smile frivolously.
But within the shootout each girl, one by one, is shot to her breast/belly.
The first girl's death is very sudden and quick. The girl is just hit, falls on her back and after some sighs she dies.
Second death is longer. When being hit the girl cries wildly, drops her gun and fearfully touches her wound. Her face is shocked. Then she falls on her back and in agony she dies, her body jerking, with legs and hands put widely apart.
After their deaths the shootout continues for a while and then it stops. Both guys survive it.
Well..., as said above, we are in the wild west, in a very harsh, cruel and merciless country. It is no time for any sadness or grieving. So despite the boys have just lost their beautiful and very young girlfriends they only look coldly at the their dead bodies.
"Oh, shit, that's a pity" says one man very indifferently.
The other guy answers: "Mmm...., they were very brave but also a little bit naive. They fired without thinking......".
And his friend finishes the dialogue: "So........ let´s take their guns...."
And they start to pick the girls' guns and they also take off their gun holsters and put them into some bags.
These things can be used by other brave men or women in the fight against the horse thieves or red skins.
But after all one man is a little bit more sensitive. So at the end he kneels to his girlfriend's corpse and unfastens the her scarf. Now her very tender but cold throat is revealed. The man kisses the scarf. "Good bye, girl" he just says, kisses her hand and puts the scarf into his pocket.
The story ends with the shots on the abandoned girls' corpses in their trousers and blouses (without guns and holsters, scarf) with blood holes. They lie on the floor beside each other and wait for the local undertaker who will put them into the coffins.
Elements of story:
- the clip can start with the shots on the parts of cowgirl clothes and props (hats, guns, jeans, blouse, boots, belts) which are put on the bed/chair/table or floor and are prepared for the girls to put them on,
- then shots on girls talking and slowly undressing some not attractive and boring female dresses,
- one girl frivolously stops the boys coming into the room because she does not want him to look at them in their lingerie,
- in the next scene both girls not in the old-fashioned dresses but on the contrary in the typical and sexy cowgirl clothes: very tight casual jeans/leather trousers, light (white, beige etc) and very tight blouses put into the trousers (button up/cowgirl style), wide belts, boots, hats (not neccessary), one girl putting scarf around her throat
- so the sharp change from the non-attractive dresses into the cowgirl sexy style should be the righet and required element,
- girls standing confidently in the cowgirl dresses with their hands on hips, talking, puting the guns into the holsters,
- detailed shots on girls' cowgirl style clothes from boots to blouses,
- boys entering the room, saying hello, huging girls, just very shortly kissing them, laughing,
- each girl prepared with her gun beside the window, smiling,
- shootout, detailed shots on the firing positions of the girls, kneeling or standing with legs apart,
- each girl one by one shot to her chest/belly, realistic deaths, one quick, one longer, droping gun, touching the wound by hand, falling on back, body jerking, gasping, legs/hands spread, deatch stare, open mouth, lying on back,
- blood holes/stains, blood from mouth,
- boys' cold reaction after the shootout, taking the girls' guns and holsters,
- one boy takes the scarf from the dead girl, kissing it,
- final shots on two dead bodies,
- no nudity,
- subtitles,
- the bandits are invisible.