🖤 Savage Syntax
This ain’t proofreading. This is a goddamn rewrite with claws.
Your story’s hot—but your sentences? Limp.
Your dialogue? Robotic.
Your pacing? 🥱
Messy books don’t fuck.
Readers are feral. If you don’t hook them in three pages, they’ll DNF and one-star you before your MC even drops their pants.
That’s where I come in.
I rip through your draft like it owes me money.
Every sentence? Sharpened.
Every beat? Tightened.
Every clunky line? Torched.
This isn’t about making your book nice.
It’s about making it dangerous.
Seductive.
Unskippable.
You write taboo morally grey chaos. Good.
Now let’s make it readable.
No soft edits. No watered-down fluff. Just brutal, precise, take-no-prisoners copyediting for authors who like their stories as filthy as their minds.
Savage Syntax.
Because if your writing can’t carry the heat, no one’s getting off. 😈
You wrote the dark romance that lives rent-free in your head.
The obsession. The chaos. The twisted little thing no one else could write.
But let’s get one thing straight:
If your execution’s off, no one gives a shit how hot your premise is.
They’ll drop your book faster than a red flag boyfriend.
🚩 Your pacing drags? They’re skimming by page 6.
🚩 Your dialogue’s stiff? They’ll wince and side-eye your Kindle.
🚩 Your spice reads like a biology textbook? Girl. They’re not even making it to the smut.
And you know what really makes me feral?
Books that almost slap.
Stories that have the guts to go dark… but can’t deliver the hit.
Flat tension. Limp prose. Fake edge.
You wrote something bold—but your writing is holding it back.
That’s not just disappointing.
That’s embarrassing.
I’m not here to pat your pages and say “good effort.”
I’m here to rip it apart and rebuild it into something readers can’t put down.
Something cruel. Addictive. Unskippable.
Because this isn't just an edit.
It's a reckoning.
You finally wrote the book you always wanted to read—
a love story soaked in tension, dripping in heat, and twisted enough to make a priest blush.
But let’s be honest for a second:
If your execution’s weak, your readers will ghost you. Hard.
🚩 Your pacing drags? They’ll skim straight to the sex.
🚩 Your dialogue’s stiff? They’ll cringe so bad they get whiplash.
🚩 Your spice reads like a biology textbook? Babe… they’re DNFing at chapter 3 and never looking back.
And the worst part?
They won’t just walk away quietly.
They’ll roast your book in group chats, TikToks, and Goodreads reviews.
Brutally. Publicly. With memes.
You wrote a story that could ruin lives.
Don’t let bad writing make it forgettable.
Let me take your manuscript, rip it apart, and turn it into something that hits like a slap and leaves readers begging for more. 😈
💀 Reviews like “this felt forced” or “these characters were fake as hell”?
Yeah, that shit spreads faster than your MC’s legs in chapter four.
And guess what? It kills books.
You ever work with an editor who:
❌ Didn’t get your dark, messy characters?
❌ Told you to tone it down—like you didn’t know exactly what you were doing?
❌ Tried to scrub your story clean so it’d be “easier to sell”?
Disgusting.
Embarrassing.
Not here.
At Savage Syntax, we don’t edit for approval.
We edit for obsession.
I don’t care if your characters are toxic, unhinged, or ten shades past morally grey—
if they slap, I’ll make sure every sentence hits just as hard.
I cut the fluff. I tighten the chaos. I make your book flow like a bloodstained love letter.
This isn’t a soft little clean-up.
This is a violent glow-up for writers who want their shit to ruin people.
Here’s How We Sharpen Your Story:
📩 Step 1: The Blood Oath (AKA Confirmation & Manuscript Submission)
Within 24 hours, you’ll get an email with:
✅ A confirmation of your booking.
✅ Instructions on where to send your manuscript (Word doc preferred).
✅ A quick questionnaire so I know exactly what your vision is—because this is your book, just leveled up.
✍️ Step 2: The Deep Cut (Editing Begins)
Once your manuscript is in, I get to work ripping into the weak spots and sharpening your prose so every sentence hits.
Expect:
🔹 Line-level fixes for pacing, flow, and sentence strength.
🔹 Scene-by-scene tension checks—because no one should skim your book.
🔹 Honest, no-BS feedback on what’s working, what’s not, and how to make it better.
📖 Step 3: The Resurrection (Your Manuscript, Reborn)
When your edit is done, you’ll get:
✅ A clean version (ready to use).
✅ A tracked version (so you can see the changes).
✅ A final feedback letter breaking down the glow-up in detail.
🚀 Step 4: The Takeover (Your Story, Unputdownable)
By the time we’re done, your book won’t just be good. It’ll be lethal. The kind of story that keeps readers up all night, craving more.
Because great books don’t just get read. They get devoured. 😏🔥
Choose a pricing plan
The Temptation Edit- Payment Plan
$1,119
per month for 3 months
For books 30k-100k words. Contact us at hello@editivepublishing.com if your book is outside the range!
Authors who want a powerful transformation without full-on hand-holding or coaching. You’ll get the structure, the style, and the substance—but the next-level intimacy? That stays locked in The Full Edit.
❌ Full Developmental Edit Plot, pacing, character arcs—shaped into something unforgettable.
✅ Line Edit Polish your voice, sharpen your tone, and make every sentence cut deep.
✅ Copy Edit Grammar, syntax, and precision—no typos here, babe.
❌ Style Sheet & Author Voice Enhancement
❌ Kink & Heat Optimization
❌ Final Polish & Read-Through
❌ Pre-Pub Formatting Advice
❌ One-on-One Coaching Calls
❌ Custom Timeline & Milestone Plan
❌ Voxer/Email Access Between Edits
Authors who want a powerful transformation without full-on hand-holding or coaching. You’ll get the structure, the style, and the substance—but the next-level intimacy? That stays locked in The Full Edit.
❌ Full Developmental Edit Plot, pacing, character arcs—shaped into something unforgettable.
✅ Line Edit Polish your voice, sharpen your tone, and make every sentence cut deep.
✅ Copy Edit Grammar, syntax, and precision—no typos here, babe.
❌ Style Sheet & Author Voice Enhancement
❌ Kink & Heat Optimization
❌ Final Polish & Read-Through
❌ Pre-Pub Formatting Advice
❌ One-on-One Coaching Calls
❌ Custom Timeline & Milestone Plan
❌ Voxer/Email Access Between Edits
The Full Edit - One Time Payment
$3,999
For books 30k-100k words. Contact us at hello@editivepublishing.com if your book is outside the range!
This is the no-holds-barred experience. You get everything. Every layer of your story ripped open, rewritten, and reforged into something unputdownable. We’re diving deep—into your plot, your characters, your voice, and your darkest, dirtiest themes. And yes, you get me with you the entire way.
✅ Full Developmental Edit We’ll rip your structure to shreds—then rebuild it with power, tension, and emotional gut punches.
✅ Line Edit Every sentence sharpened. Every paragraph made to seduce.
✅ Copy Edit Grammar, spelling, syntax—polished to perfection.
✅ Style Sheet & Author Voice Enhancement We define your voice and make sure every word screams you—confident, consistent, unforgettable.
✅ Kink & Heat Optimization If the scenes don’t burn, I’ll make them burn. No fade-to-black here.
✅ Final Polish & Read-Through One last full run-through to make sure every beat hits and every scene flows.
✅ Pre-Pub Formatting Advice Clean, pro formatting suggestions to prep for self-pub or Smashwords.
✅ One-on-One Coaching Calls (3 total — 1/month) Private. Personal. These aren’t just check-ins—they’re creative deep dives.
✅ Custom Timeline & Milestone Plan Your edit, your pace, with deadlines built around your life and goals.
✅ Voxer/Email Access Between Edits Unlimited check-ins. Got a panic moment or plot freak-out? I’m there.
This is the no-holds-barred experience. You get everything. Every layer of your story ripped open, rewritten, and reforged into something unputdownable. We’re diving deep—into your plot, your characters, your voice, and your darkest, dirtiest themes. And yes, you get me with you the entire way.
✅ Full Developmental Edit We’ll rip your structure to shreds—then rebuild it with power, tension, and emotional gut punches.
✅ Line Edit Every sentence sharpened. Every paragraph made to seduce.
✅ Copy Edit Grammar, spelling, syntax—polished to perfection.
✅ Style Sheet & Author Voice Enhancement We define your voice and make sure every word screams you—confident, consistent, unforgettable.
✅ Kink & Heat Optimization If the scenes don’t burn, I’ll make them burn. No fade-to-black here.
✅ Final Polish & Read-Through One last full run-through to make sure every beat hits and every scene flows.
✅ Pre-Pub Formatting Advice Clean, pro formatting suggestions to prep for self-pub or Smashwords.
✅ One-on-One Coaching Calls (3 total — 1/month) Private. Personal. These aren’t just check-ins—they’re creative deep dives.
✅ Custom Timeline & Milestone Plan Your edit, your pace, with deadlines built around your life and goals.
✅ Voxer/Email Access Between Edits Unlimited check-ins. Got a panic moment or plot freak-out? I’m there.
The Slow Burn – Payment Plan
$2,229
per month for 2 months
For books 30k-100k words. Contact us at hello@editivepublishing.com if your book is outside the range!
You want the good stuff—but you need to pace yourself. The Slow Burn gives you everything you need to get your book in fighting shape, with rich editorial depth and pro-level polish. Just… no calls, no coaching, no hand-holding. This isn’t a full seduction—it’s a long, smoldering tease.
✅ Full Developmental Edit Plot twists, character arcs, tension—tightened to make readers ache to turn the page.
✅ Line Edit Tone, flow, pacing—refined to hit like a whipcrack.
✅ Copy Edit Clean, precise, and polished. No slip-ups. No errors.
✅ Style Sheet & Author Voice Enhancement
✅ Kink & Heat Optimization
✅ Final Polish & Read-Through
✅ Pre-Pub Formatting Advice
❌ One-on-One Coaching Calls
❌ Custom Timeline & Milestone Plan
❌ Voxer/Email Access Between Edits
You want the good stuff—but you need to pace yourself. The Slow Burn gives you everything you need to get your book in fighting shape, with rich editorial depth and pro-level polish. Just… no calls, no coaching, no hand-holding. This isn’t a full seduction—it’s a long, smoldering tease.
✅ Full Developmental Edit Plot twists, character arcs, tension—tightened to make readers ache to turn the page.
✅ Line Edit Tone, flow, pacing—refined to hit like a whipcrack.
✅ Copy Edit Clean, precise, and polished. No slip-ups. No errors.
✅ Style Sheet & Author Voice Enhancement
✅ Kink & Heat Optimization
✅ Final Polish & Read-Through
✅ Pre-Pub Formatting Advice
❌ One-on-One Coaching Calls
❌ Custom Timeline & Milestone Plan
❌ Voxer/Email Access Between Edits
Frequently Asked Questions
😈 Frequently Asked (But Usually Hesitant) Questions
📌 What’s the turnaround time?
Depends on how thicc your book is. Most edits drop back in 4–6 weeks, but if your manuscript's an icky mess or dummy long, we’ll talk timeline before we start.
No ghosting. No bullshit. Just straight-up expectations.
NOTE: If you select a payment plan, your completed manuscript will be delivered after your last payment is made.
📌 Can I do a payment plan?
Hell yeah. Whether you wanna pay all at once or ease in with a split, we’ve got options.
Because your book deserves to be savage—even if your wallet’s on a slow burn.
📌 Will you help with queer rep and sensitivity?
Wrong editor. This isn’t a sensitivity service.
I’m not here to fix stereotypes—I’m here to make your prose slap. If your representation is shallow, I’ll say it straight. If it’s rich, I’ll make it read like sin.
You’re the writer. I’m the scalpel.
📌 What if my book is longer than 100k?
Congrats, you’re long-winded.
Flat rate up to 100k. After that, you get a custom quote based on how much extra mess I have to fix. No weird fees. No petty line counting. Just fair pay for savage work. Contact us at hello@editivepublishing.com.
📌 What if my book is shorter?
Each plan includes Edits of your book from 30k-100k words! Contact us at hello@editivepublishing.com for custom pricing for books under 30k words or over 100k words.
