Your First Ten Pages - Sample Manuscript Evaluation

The first pages of your manuscript are the most important.

They set the stage for your story, introduce your voice, and decide whether a reader, agent, or publisher keeps turning the pages. With this service, I will evaluate the first 10 pages (up to 2,500 words) of your manuscript and provide professional, constructive feedback.

What you’ll receive:

• An evaluation of your opening pages with both strengths and areas for improvement.
• Feedback on your story’s hook, character introductions, pacing, and dialogue.
• Notes on your writing style, tone, and voice to ensure you’re engaging readers right away.
• Actionable suggestions to help you revise and strengthen your opening.

This service is ideal if you:

• Want to test the strength of your beginning before investing in a full evaluation.
• Need quick, targeted feedback to guide early revisions.
• Are looking for a low-cost way to experience my editorial style before booking a full manuscript evaluation.

Turnaround: 5 business days from receiving your project.

Upon completing your purchase, you will receive instructions on how to submit your project and schedule your consultation.