Personal Statement Review

Here’s a high-converting sales page in the Problem–Aggravate–Solution (P-A-S) format to help you promote your $30 Personal Statement Review Service. It’s persuasive, detailed, and focused on building trust and urgency:

🚨 Your Personal Statement Might Be the Reason You’re Not Getting In…

You’ve done everything right—aced your premed classes, volunteered at hospitals, joined clubs, and maybe even worked a job or two.

You’re finally applying to med school… and now it’s time to write the most high-stakes essay of your life:

📝 Your Personal Statement.

But suddenly…

❌ You’re staring at a blank page.

❌ Every sentence sounds cliché.

❌ You don’t know what med schools want.

❌ You’re worried it’s not “enough” to stand out.

And worst of all?

You’ve read it so many times you don’t even know if it’s good anymore.

😰 Here’s the Truth No One Tells You…

A weak personal statement won’t just hurt your app—

💔 It can erase the impact of your clinical experience.

💔 It can overshadow your 515 MCAT.

💔 It can lead to no interviews, no second looks… and a wasted cycle.

The stakes are TOO HIGH to send in something that’s “meh.”

But you don’t need to shell out $300 to some influencer who barely gives you feedback.

You need someone who actually gets it.

✅ Book a Personal Statement Review That Actually Helps You Get In

Hey there, I’m Sanjana 👋

I’m an M3 at RWJMS, first-gen, low-income, and I got into med school with multiple acceptances—

without the money, the mentors, or the map.

I’ve helped dozens of students transform bland drafts into powerful, authentic stories that resonate with admissions committees.

Here’s what you’ll get for just $30:

✨ A line-by-line edit of your entire personal statement (up to 5,300 characters)

✨ Focused feedback on structure, storytelling, clarity, and content

✨ Suggestions to make your narrative stronger, unique, and unforgettable

✨ Return in 2 weeks or less

✨ A review that’s brutally honest and deeply empowering

💡 How It Works

1. Click the booking link below and submit your payment
2. Submit your personal statement draft link/file (Google Doc preferred) here - Google Form for submission
3. Get your fully edited statement + commentary within 1 weeks

📬 Need it faster? Message me @TheIndieMedGirl on instagram for rush availability.

💬 If You’re Still Unsure…

• “What if I don’t have a compelling story?” → I help you find the gold in your lived experience.
• “What if I already had someone look at it?” → Fresh eyes + strategic edits can make all the difference.
• “What if $30 is too much?” → This might be the highest ROI $30 you ever spend.

❓FAQs

Q: Can I submit more than one version?

A: Yes, but each version will count as a separate review.

Q: Do you offer rush edits?

A: DM me first to confirm availability. A small rush fee may apply.

Q: Will you write it for me?

A: Nope. But I will help you rewrite it in a way that sounds like you, only 100x clearer and more compelling.

🎯 Ready to Craft a Statement That Gets Interviews?

Let’s make your story the one they can’t forget.