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🔥 The Razor Edit 🔥


Because Readers Don’t Wait.

Your book has seconds to hook a reader. If the first few pages don’t grab them, they’re gone—onto the next book, never looking back. No sales. No hype. No chance at a binge-read worthy series.

The fix? A ruthless, high-impact 500-word edit that slices the fat, sharpens your voice, and makes your story unputdownable.


What You’re Getting:

🔪 A brutal, no-BS edit on 500 words—your opening, a weak middle, or any scene that needs fire.

📖 Instant reader-first insight. If they’re skimming? You’re losing them. I’ll show you where—and how to fix it.

⚡ Edits that cut deep. No fluff. No vague feedback. Just the hard truth and clear, actionable fixes.

What’s Killing Your Book Right Now?

🚨 A slow opening? No one cares about your MC’s morning routine. We cut straight to the tension.

🚨 Bloated backstory? Readers don’t need a character’s entire childhood in chapter one. Hook first. Details later.

🚨 Scenes that don’t pull double duty? Every scene should reveal, escalate, or explode. If it doesn’t—it’s dead weight.

Who This Is For:

âś… Writers of romance, fantasy, sci-fi, horror, thrillers, and any genre that thrives on tension.

âś… Authors who want clear, reader-focused feedback that makes their book impossible to put down.

âś… Writers ready to cut, tighten, and level up their storytelling.

Who This Is For:

âś… Writers of romance, fantasy, sci-fi, horror, thrillers, and any genre that thrives on tension.

âś… Authors who want clear, reader-focused feedback that makes their book impossible to put down.

âś… Writers ready to cut, tighten, and level up their storytelling.

For just $27, The Razor Edit will slice through the weak spots and show you exactly what’s keeping your book from gripping readers like a chokehold.

👇 Grab your 500-word Razor Edit now. 👇

Meet Your Editor – Sydney Feron

I don’t do soft edits. I do brutal, high-impact edits that make your book impossible to put down.

I’m Sydney Feron—editor, writer, and unapologetic lover of dark, morally grey, and addictive fiction. I’ve spent years dissecting what makes readers binge, what makes them DNF, and what actually sells in romance, fantasy, sci-fi, horror, and thrillers.

Here’s the truth: Readers don’t owe you their time. If your book drags, stumbles, or doesn’t hook hard enough, they’ll toss it and never look back. That’s where I come in.

I specialize in:

🔥 Tension & Pacing – Keeping readers glued to the page.

✂️ Sharp, Tight Prose – Cutting bloat so every word hits.

💣 Unputdownable Hooks – Making sure your book grabs readers and doesn’t let go.

I won’t sugarcoat my feedback. I will make your writing stronger. If you want an edit that pushes your story from “okay” to obsessive page-turner, let’s get to work.