Epic fiction short storie named ASTREA AND THE TREE OF SECRETS-BY F.THE LEGENDARY

Hello guy, I'm F.the legendary . this is my first short stories which is about an innocent little girl who lost her familly in unfortunate incident, then she accepted dark powers to get revenge but then she decided to get rid of the powers because they were turning her bad . all that happened through exciting events which described in a 2087 word short story, if this one got some sales i promise it will be better versions of the storie

First i'm writing because i love writing
second i puting them here because i want share my work and make some money too.

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