The Dialogue Reality Test
The Dialogue Reality Test
Craft · Dialogue editing
Dialogue can be technically correct and still sound wrong on the page. Often the problem isn't grammar. It's that the conversation feels too neat, too polite, too explanatory, or too detached from how people actually speak.
This pack helps you edit dialogue so it sounds more human, more specific, and more true to the moment. Covers deflection, interruption, silence, cultural voice, pressure, privacy, and what dialogue is actually doing in a scene — with worked examples throughout.
If it sounds like a polished explanation, check it. If it sounds like a human being, keep going.
PDF download. Print or use on screen.