Toby offered me insights regarding story, structure, and character development which were devoid of ego and keyed into the nature of my own voice. Through his guidance I was able to address gaps in my script I was previously unable to amend on my own. His instinct for narrative is coupled with a sharp sense of tone, and the importance of each writer’s unique perspective, a perspective which he honored by not imposing his own ideas about how I should tell my story; rather by posing questions that helped me to find my own way, encouraging me each step of the way. 

If you're looking for a script doctor, Toby certainly has those diagnostic chops, but more empowering to writers is the foundational approach he takes… through a series of questions he will open up your script for you so you can get in there and see for yourself. A session with Toby gives you access to your own play that you didn't realize you were locked out of!

Toby has an extraordinary ability to listen actively, communicate effectively, and integrate diverse perspectives… he fosters a positive and productive collaborative environment, demonstrating a commitment to collective success and a genuine respect.

I have been fortunate enough to receive constructive feedback from Toby on multiple screenplays. His positive and supportive nature is contagious, always considering each group member and asking, how can I help you. If you’re thinking of Toby for your script feedback process, I would say do it!