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The Story Clinic — Complete Self-Editing System Romance + Genre Editions

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Edit your novel like a professional editorial team walked you through it — and approve every change yourself.


Edit your novel like a professional

Hiring a developmental editor, a line editor, and a proofreader runs $2,000–$5,000 a book. Pasting your whole manuscript into an AI and hoping costs you your voice. The Story Clinic is the third way: the complete editing PROCESS a paid team would run, organized into guided passes — with you making every call.

Images from the Romance-Fiction Tool

  • Auto Detect Issues

    Automatically detects issues and highlights them in your text before you start the editing passes.

  • Reader Satisfaction Tracker

    The reader-satisfaction tracker built on the tension-to-payoff model romance lives on.

  • Story Lab Reports for Romance

    Five story lab reports modeled on the analytics bestseller publishers use

Editing Passes

Load your manuscript (it splits into chapters for you), and the Clinic builds an expert prompt for each pass. You paste it into the AI you already use — Claude, ChatGPT, any of them. When your AI answers, paste the revision back and the Clinic shows you every change like a Word document: red for cuts, green for additions, an Accept or Keep-mine button on every paragraph. Nothing touches your manuscript until you press apply. There's always an undo.


Your book is never uploaded anywhere. No account, no subscription.

Images from the Genre-Fiction Tool

  • Genre-Fiction

    ⚔️ Genre — everything above, recalibrated for sci-fi, fantasy, mystery, horror and psychological thriller,

  • Genre-Fiction Editing Passes

    Two extra editing passes romance never needs:

    • World & Rules Consistency (your magic system's promises, kept)
    • Clue & Fair-Play Audit (every reveal earned).
  • Story Lab Reports for Genre-Fiction

    Seven lab reports, including the Dread Curve and the Mystery Engine.

This is not an "AI writes your book" gadget. The Clinic never generates a word of story. It's the editorial process — organized, guided, and entirely under your control.


Instant download: two single-file tools that open in any browser on Windows, Mac or tablet. Work offline, auto-save as you edit, free updates.


Brand new to editing? The Editing Coach (also in this store) is the gentle on-ramp. The Clinic is where you graduate to.

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