Written Feedback on Your Writing

Have you’ve written something and feel unsure about what to do next?

This is for providing clear, thoughtful written feedback on what’s already there. This is not editing, coaching, or critique.

How this works

You send me a piece of writing.

I read it carefully and respond in writing.

You receive:

• A 2–4 page written response
• Observations on clarity, structure, tone, and coherence
• What’s working
• What feels muddy or strained
• What wants more space, and what may want to be cut

My role is not to tell you what to write, but to reflect what is actually present in your work.

This is not...

• Editing or proofreading
• Line-by-line critique
• Coaching or teaching
• Advice on what you “should” do with your writing

I won’t rewrite your work or steer it toward a particular outcome.

Who this is for

This is for writers who:

• Desire clarity without being overridden
• Feel stuck but don’t want advice overload
• Are developing essays, manuscripts, fiction, or experimental work
• Prefer reflection over instruction

Practical details

• Length: Up to 3,000 words
• Delivery: Written feedback via PDF or email
• Turnaround: Within 7–10 days (depending on volume and health--I have chronic pain)
• Price: $55 USD
• Instructions on how to send your work to me is in the included PDF Download.

A note on pace

I work deliberately and thoughtfully.

This offering is designed to respect both your work and my health.

If you’re looking for fast turnaround or intensive back-and-forth, this likely won’t be a fit.

Thank you for understanding!